hazy mist

Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars #16, Shiki's 

"lost in the mist"

The goal is to write an all new classical haiku (following the rules of the classics, you can find those rules in Carpe Diem Lecture 1 in the menu) inspired on the one given.


kaerimireba yuki-aishi hito kasumi keri

Credits: Morning Haze

when I looked back,
the man who passed
was lost in the mist

© Masaoka Shiki

familiar bird
she searches in vain for name
in mind's hazy mist

©  Janice Adcock

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI