Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #79, Ese's "through the darkest hour"
through the darkest hour
every tree top in the forest
adorned with a star
© Ese
Ese wrote this haiku in response on "Starry Night" a painting by Van Gogh which we had for prompt in February 2015.
And now it's the goal to complete this Tan Renga with a two-lined stanza of 7-7 syllables, however there is no need to use that strict syllables count.
every tree top in the forest
adorned with a star (Ese)
new years celebrations
lightshow against the dark sky (Chèvrefeuille)
Okay it is my turn to see if I enhance the beauty of Ese's haiku or fall miserably short.
through the darkest hour
every tree top in the forest
adorned with a star (Ese)
with a twinkle in its eyes
the owl glides on silent wings (Janice)
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
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