Carpe Diem #745 moonrise
don't be like me
even though we're like the melon
split in two
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
Following the master's (Basho) advise I am doing my own thing with this challenge from our host, © Chèvrefeuille.
An eight stanza renga with Basho's moonrise as the hokku, the first stanza.
Photo: YuhtungaJungleMoonrise |
moonrise
holding their hands on their knees
evening at a house
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
like bookends they sit gazing
at the mysterious light
black sky
pinpoint stars sparkling
a nymphs diadem
scampering through the forest
with grapevines for trapeze swings
wide-eyed babe
nuzzles in familiar arms
a suckled breast
sly nymph tickles a pink nose
the pup chases in its dreams
weeping willow leaves
fluttered by a gentle breeze
sing a song
shadowy light of moonrise
adorns the simple thatch home
© Janice Adcock
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on
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